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elysialaw
Joined: 15 Aug 2006
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 Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 4:04 am Post subject: Can someone help me with this sentence for my essay? |
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| Can someone please help me make this sentence on my essay sound better, please! thank you"My persistence and determination led to me becoming a highly accomplished pianist. So accomplished that eventually my own piano teacher asked me to become a piano teacher myself." |
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pietlul5493
Joined: 18 May 2004
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| Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2004 5:45 am Post subject: Can someone help me with this sentence for my essay? |
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| How about:My persistence and determination led me to become a highly accomplished pianist. So accomplished, in fact, that eventually my own piano teacher asked me to become a piano teacher myself. |
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dragonsmercy
Joined: 24 Apr 2004
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| Posted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 7:26 am Post subject: Can someone help me with this sentence for my essay? |
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| Change The Sentence To This:"My persistence and determination led me to becoming a highly accomplished pianist. So accomplished that eventually my own piano teacher asked me to become a piano teacher myself." |
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